tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5500654915069474841.post2086789868238402135..comments2014-12-01T10:02:38.986+13:00Comments on Annliz : First Day At SwimmingPES 2012 Blogs Adminhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16237049368913248291noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5500654915069474841.post-91398896153470165372012-05-16T08:56:16.411+12:002012-05-16T08:56:16.411+12:00OK thank youOK thank youAnnlizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15775931032817138513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5500654915069474841.post-15296480249178674562012-05-11T14:49:55.051+12:002012-05-11T14:49:55.051+12:00Well done Annliz. I think its great that you have ...Well done Annliz. I think its great that you have included different sentence beginnings. It makes your writing a lot more interesting to read.<br /><br />How about trying to include some speech in your next piece of writing.Mr Chris Markshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14912841501575471267noreply@blogger.com