Narrative

   “Oh no” Jake said. Looking around Tex their dog had ran off before putting on his leash. They ran into the forest hoping he would be there. “Ahh”! Shouted Jake. A tree had fallen on him.

He tried to get out but there was no way. He thought he was alone stuck under the tree  but his brother Bob was stuck as well. “Help, Help”! Bob shouted, no one heard a thing. He had a mobile phone but no luck because there is no phone service in the forest.

Then there came Tex their smart dog sniffing his way through seeing them stuck under the tree. They tried telling him to go fetch help but he looked hungry and started to howl. A few minutes later finally help was there. One of the helpers had to run out of the forest so they could call the ambulance.

Luckily Tex saved the day by his horrible, loud howling. After the hospital back home, on the couch and watching TV. It was quite sad because choppers had to chop some trees that looked like they are old and could fall.

The Ants Army

We have been reading the story The Ant Army by Val Neubecker which has illustrations by Tony Anderson who uses photos and drawings together like this one I have created.

As you can see it’s a healthy sandwich on a brown table. I drew this because it describes page ten and eleven on the article i’m reading. The sandwich is real but the background is drawn in tux paint.

Bad day

“Oh no we have ran out of milk” Mum said. Ashleigh’s mum told her to run to the Pt England shop and buy some milk. As she got there she walked to the back of the shop with a lady where the milk was, suddenly she heard a noise. “BOOM BOOM” there was a loud noise coming from outside.

She just found out that she left her mobile phone at home. She ran outside and there was a drunk man with a gun. He was shooting everywhere he looked. Everyone was really frightened.

When the police arrived he ran out of bullets. He tried to escape but he was to drunk. He kept on falling down. The police caught up to him and arrested him. Luckily the owner of the laundromat had a phone.

It was a horrible day for her. She was scared to death. Luckily the police was there to save the day.

My Narrative Story

 One lovely afternoon in a forest there lived a girl named Aldora with her mum, dad, pet dog named Tex and her two friends Ana and Meleane. “Go take Tex for a walk” said Aldora’s mum. So off she went.As she opened the gate and ready to put on his leash, he had ran off.


She tried to chase him but he was too fast. She raced down to her friend Ana’s house who lived nearby. She catches her breath and asks Ana if she had seen tex But she had not seen him.

Then she saw her friend Meleane wondering around the park throwing bread into the duck pond.
She just remembered that Tex was hungry, so she ran home and got his food. She put it in a bowl and outside the gate. Then there came Tex running home and eating like as if he hasn’t ate before.

Aldora was very happy and releifed that Tex came home safe. Tex is really happy to be fed his favourite food. Luckily he had a great sense of smell.

My Olympic Movie

Paralympic!

“I think this is going to be hard” Saying to my friend like I was scared. Mr Marks told us to get a thick band, put it around our waist and slide one of our arms into it. Not knowing what to do we had to run quick as we can with one of our arms tied. It was awkward and challenging.

“Hahaha” Mr Marks laughed. Most of us looked a bit silly. It was very hilarious running there and back. Some of us even looked like we were dancing. I hope that i didn’t look silly or hilarious.  

At the end I wish that we could keep on going but we had more paralympic activities. I had lots of fun and it was enjoyable. I hope we get to do this another time. I think everyone had a great time as well.

Wheelchair Sprint

Looking at the athletes spoked and disced wheels, they have reached the finish line but they can’t stop because their wheels are spinning faster than ever. Most the athletes have amputated limbs. Their challenge is to try get to the finish line even though their legs are amputated.