Hey Annliz:) I love it how you included what school you go to, what class your in and who your beautiful teacher is but in your first paragraph I think it's a bit weird how you just chucked in the sentence "I only have one sister." The rest of your stories amazing just so you know. Keep up the awesomeness!!!!
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Hey Annliz:)
I love it how you included what school you go to, what class your in and who your beautiful teacher is but in your first paragraph I think it's a bit weird how you just chucked in the sentence "I only have one sister." The rest of your stories amazing just so you know. Keep up the awesomeness!!!!
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