Wednesday, 19 March 2014

"Show" No "Tell"

Please, Please” Laura yelled, can I please come with you to the shops? I’ve told you more than twice, no you can’t go the the shop with me”. Laura scrunched her face and ran into her bedroom door with a big slam. Your so means” Laura yelled

Standing there waiting for the coach to name out the Netball team, Keri Stood nervously thinking that if she would've made it or not. As the coach announced the names, Keri crossed her fingers and closed her eyes wishing to be called out.

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