Wednesday, 3 April 2013

Dory and Marlin

Deep Down in the shallow clean sea swam Dory and her friend Marlin. “Hey Mr Grumpy Gills
When life gets you down, you know what you gotta do?” Inquired Dory. “I don’t want to know what you gotta do“ replied Marlin feeling really angry after losing the goggles that were his only clue to finding his son.

“Just keep swimming, just keep swimming, just keep swimming, swimming, swimming

What do we do? We swim swim” Dory sang joyfully, while dragging Marlin deeper in the sea. ”See I’m gonna get stuck now with that song now it’s in my head” Yelled Marlin angrily.


anab said...

Hey I like your story it really great keep it up best friend !!!

Quziyah said...

Hey Annliz, This is a really thoughtful story about Dory and Marlin. You used your punctuation very carefully. Inquired, Joyfully and Dragging were my three favourite words.
Keep up the creative words Annliz!


Gloria said...

Hey Ann Liz,
Amazing work on your Finding Nemo paragraph! You did a great job adding detail around the speech. Keep it up!


Jouan said...

Hey Annaliz,
I love the detail you have added to the what once was boring speech. You made the story so much more interesting to read! Again, AWESOME STORY!!!

From Jouan:)

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