Thursday, 2 August 2012

Exhausting Running!

 Every weekday depending on the weather, which I wish would rain, we usually  go out for cross country practice. We go in groups. I go with the year six girls. One day  Mr Marks made the cross country course longer.

   “Oh man now it’s our turn” I said quietly to myself. Off we go running through the breeze and out the door. So tired I am huffing and puffing, really exhausted I should stop sprinting. I felt my forehead and there I was sweating. Now I was dying to have a long, long drink. I was jogging on my way only halfway back.  I wish I was like Grace and  I wish that I was fit enough that I didn’t have to run.

Finally I am back ready for my stretches. Mr Marks was standing at the front waiting for the rest of the kids to get back.  Stretching side to side, front to back with our legs. After that we stretched our arms.

“Yay the bell rang, time to head home” I said to my friends. What an exhausting, tiring day. I felt my legs and they were very sore. I felt so, so horrible. "I hope I get fitter”, singing to myself.  


Annliz said...

Im enjoying running

Mr Marks said...

Nice writing Annliz. Well done on varying your sentence beginnings and adding different types of sentences. Your paragraphs are all about one idea to which is great.

Keep this standard up please.

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