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Friday, 9 November 2012

Triathlon

“Huh huh huh” i breath like as if was going to die. Triathlon is so exhausting, it includes running, biking, and diving on your stomach on a water slide. First is water slide then biking and lastly running. “Oh man still got one round to do” I said to Ana my friend. I could tell her face was red easily.

First I had to slide on the water slide which was exhausting. I had to slide four times. sliding on my stomach was so fun but when I finished I had grass all over me.

Next I had to run quickly and pick a bike, but there is one important rule that you must put on your helmet the right way and make sure it is clicked. Push your bike to the starting line and hop on. Then you have to two laps around the flags. There are four flags that you must ride past. Now we park the bikes and put the helmets where we found them.

Lastly we run fast to the running course. We are allowed to run when ever we want. “yay almost there yes i’m here” I said happily.

“Woo hoo I made it and yay I came first”! Shouting cheerfully and tired at the same time. Triathlon is not that bad at all. Once you try it you will start loving it. Just remember to stay fit.  

Tuesday, 6 November 2012

Jumping Off a High Roof

One Night at his house a boy named Sam had a birthday. He wished that one day he could jump off his roof. In the morning he was very bored. He was planning to climb up his dad John’s ladder to the top of his roof and jump onto his trampoline.

He walked back and then he ran so fast that he jumped too far. He landed on solid ground and damaged his head and back. His mother Adlina ran out to see what was going on. She ran to the phone and rang the ambulance.

Ambulance arrived and took Sam to the hospital as fast as they could. He had head injury and also his back. The good news were that he was still alive after his head surgery. But the bad news is that he has to learn how to walk again.

He was lucky he is still alive, thanks to the nurses and doctors. He has learnt how to walk again and he has learnt a lesson as well. Sam is the luckiest boy in the world.

Thursday, 1 November 2012

Drifting In The Hot Desert

Drifting through the desert is so exhausting. There are two boys driving in a dune buggy. Their names are John and caleb.

They were driving so slow that they got stuck. Caleb forgot to bring shovels incase this happens. They used their hands to dig. Luckily John brang some water.

They had a huge Australian flag hanging on the dune buggy. they were hoping that they could use it to get help. John took off the flag and waved it around and finally people arrived. He was happy that they were saved because the dune buggy was sinking as the sand is so soft.

“Finally we are home sweet home’’ Caleb says relaxing his feet in a bucket of cold water. The san in the desert was really hot. John didn't say anything because he could only concentrate on having a rest.

Monday, 29 October 2012

Narrative

   “Oh no” Jake said. Looking around Tex their dog had ran off before putting on his leash. They ran into the forest hoping he would be there. “Ahh”! Shouted Jake. A tree had fallen on him.

He tried to get out but there was no way. He thought he was alone stuck under the tree  but his brother Bob was stuck as well. “Help, Help”! Bob shouted, no one heard a thing. He had a mobile phone but no luck because there is no phone service in the forest.

Then there came Tex their smart dog sniffing his way through seeing them stuck under the tree. They tried telling him to go fetch help but he looked hungry and started to howl. A few minutes later finally help was there. One of the helpers had to run out of the forest so they could call the ambulance.

Luckily Tex saved the day by his horrible, loud howling. After the hospital back home, on the couch and watching TV. It was quite sad because choppers had to chop some trees that looked like they are old and could fall.

Friday, 26 October 2012

The Ants Army



We have been reading the story The Ant Army by Val Neubecker which has illustrations by Tony Anderson who uses photos and drawings together like this one I have created.

As you can see it’s a healthy sandwich on a brown table. I drew this because it describes page ten and eleven on the article i’m reading. The sandwich is real but the background is drawn in tux paint.

Friday, 19 October 2012

Bad day

“Oh no we have ran out of milk” Mum said. Ashleigh’s mum told her to run to the Pt England shop and buy some milk. As she got there she walked to the back of the shop with a lady where the milk was, suddenly she heard a noise. “BOOM BOOM” there was a loud noise coming from outside.

She just found out that she left her mobile phone at home. She ran outside and there was a drunk man with a gun. He was shooting everywhere he looked. Everyone was really frightened.

When the police arrived he ran out of bullets. He tried to escape but he was to drunk. He kept on falling down. The police caught up to him and arrested him. Luckily the owner of the laundromat had a phone.

It was a horrible day for her. She was scared to death. Luckily the police was there to save the day.

Thursday, 27 September 2012

My Narrative Story











 One lovely afternoon in a forest there lived a girl named Aldora with her mum, dad, pet dog named Tex and her two friends Ana and Meleane. “Go take Tex for a walk” said Aldora’s mum. So off she went.As she opened the gate and ready to put on his leash, he had ran off.


She tried to chase him but he was too fast. She raced down to her friend Ana’s house who lived nearby. She catches her breath and asks Ana if she had seen tex But she had not seen him.

Then she saw her friend Meleane wondering around the park throwing bread into the duck pond.
She just remembered that Tex was hungry, so she ran home and got his food. She put it in a bowl and outside the gate. Then there came Tex running home and eating like as if he hasn’t ate before.

Aldora was very happy and releifed that Tex came home safe. Tex is really happy to be fed his favourite food. Luckily he had a great sense of smell.